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Didn't quite think that after all these years
I'd still be like this
But I am and I can't help it and it almost induces tears

Something's wrong with my heart
Something's wrong with my head
Something's wrong with my neck
I keep thinking that it's almost dead

Then it returns full force in the worst way
It's something that strangers don't know

Few can believe I'm a hopeless romantic
But oh how I am
It lurks in the shadows of my militance
Quietly, lying in pain
Weak and chained

It slowly starves in that dark corner of my mind
But it's only a matter of time
Until it gets so hungry it froths at the mouth
Running to the end of the chain and baring its teeth

It wants a sweet, understanding girl
To bring down and tell everything to
Bite her, scratch her, tear her apart
Kiss her gently and cuddle her
Be there for her when she's sad

Intelligence and to have a level head
To not stop taking her damn meds
That's all it really wants

I lamentably cut the chain
It needs to catch you
It's starvation causes me too much pain
I need to catch you

Let me bite you, scratch you, tear you apart
Kiss you gently and love you with all my heart

You may think I'm crazy but I'll give you anything you need
Just give me your love and your teeth
:iconaufruhrasylum:

Author's Comments

First poem in ages. Wrote it because I'm exhausted.

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:icondisillusioneddefect:
This is a beautiful piece. I cant help reading it over. Such aggressive sorrow, its enchanting and yet dismantling.
:iconnazomeita:
Ah, this is beautiful, I always say I have no patience for poems, but then I read yours. XD Perhaps it's because I actually know the writer personally and know how deeply seated these problems really are...would you mind if I made a visual for this? I've been meaning to draw Dam-n-Gabe for a while now~

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HYA-HOO
:iconsubjectivereality:
Aw, this is so touching. ;; It feels really soft, with these sort of flashes of intensity. It's awesome!

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No, YOUR mom.
:iconlilgraver:
i have never had a head for poems but i do love reading yours

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hug me or i shall destroy you......
:iconaufruhrasylum:
No, I wouldn't mind if you made a visual for it, it's an honor personally.

On that note, thanks alot everyone for your comments. Had no idea so many people liked these damn things, ha ha.

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:iconxeira:
that's so powerful. it gets under your skin in a way my english is to poor to describe :|

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